2nd draft of my position paper...

Today I meet Mr.Omid to discuss about my position paper. I asked few question to make sure that I was at the right track. I asked him if I needed more supporting details and he told me to add about 2 to 3 more supporting details. He also asked me to put in examples from other literature work. So I did. I manage put in a few more point and added in other stories that revolve around the same theme of gender stereotyping. After the class I manage to finish up my 2nd draft so that it can be edited more during the group discussion scheduled for next week.Im looking forward to the group discussion.Hope it will help me better my position paper.Till then...